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Wednesday, September 7, 2016

9/6/2016

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Content Objective: I can edit and revise the rough draft of my news article and provide qualitative peer feedback. 
Language Objective: I will edit and revise my rough draft and give feedback to two of my peers. 

Essential Question: How do you effectively edit and revise the rough draft of a news story? 

Agenda: 
1. Bell Work: Staying in third person

2. Deadline Pitfalls: Some things to avoid. 

3. Headline writing Activity: 
Create two versions of a headline for your story (one longer one shorter)

4. Peer Reviews and Edits:
Go through the steps outlined above and give feedback to two other students before going back and revising your own deadline. 

Assignments: 
  • Bell Work
  • add headline (two to your draft
  • Peer reviews (comment on two others) 
  • edits

Deadline for EDITED drafts: Friday, September 9, by midnight; Remember to turn in deadlines BOTH on CANVAS and share them with flochths@gmail.com
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